Things gonna got to say this way,
this would be, yeah , my day,
all I got to do is , give a real good shot
strike the iron while its real hot.
This time , things gonna be my way,
but that should come to me ,
Life is a chain of complexities,
but don’t look it that way,
Life is about applying your philosophy,
PS :my second bad attempt to crap something poetic. still it needs to be edited .Lot of editing left still.But felt like publishing it first and editing it on the improvisation of my thoughts :)
5 comments:
poem bagundi
nuvvu ilagee write ayipoo
nenu music director ayipothaa ;))
iddaram kalisi oka album release cheddam ;)
really good one at dis pace u can be a professional no doubt about dat keep rockin oh sorry keep writin
good one...
the line "life is... wid constantly changin priorities" is nice to hear but very hard to digest(at least for ppl like u&me:).
get into eng.litr to make it in a more poetic form... :)
5first stanza says that"iwill not loose the opportunity"
second stanza says"Let the opportunity come to me"
next stanzas says "To hell will opportunities i will enjoy life to the full"
its confusing but when u read with the poet i clears in your mind
style is satisfactory..
expecting more poems from u.
keep crapping as u say
life is always we see it n our attitude towards it......thoughts very well expressed...keep it up...
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