Why do i shed tear,
When i know you cannot be near,
You wouldn't come to my life again,
Oh my dear, Oh my dear.
I know I have been betrayed,
banal were the moments which together we lived,
All the beautiful things were just faked,
I don't want to live, I want to be dead.
You are sole cause of my dejection,
Who moved me to heights of frustration,
I now regret for our relation,
Even if i ask you,you don't have any explanation.
All I do is now cry and cry,
I take drugs, Hallucinate , to substitute your high,
I don't have anything left,
I just want to die, I just want to die.
Though betrayed , I still love you,
You are my insanity,I want you,
You are the only one, Without you,
There is nothing that I can do
PS: Just an effort or try to understand the feelings of person who had a love failure :)
2 comments:
very good... emotions instilled poem... I could see this for the first time in your poems... guess, this is your 'once upon a time' feel... so, buddy, I can understand your feelings... ;) keep dumping your crap on our minds...i love to clean my mind as often as possible... heheh. cherio.
Nice one,
aptly portrayed your feelings, it would have been better if you would have described her as well, after all the description of her would generate a feeling within the readers and once you start expressing your feelings the reader would expeience your pain and he/she would be more involved in it. overall worth reading !!
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